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评:问好同学,我们五律学习过了,进入七律学习阶段,不管我们写的好与不好,起码格律首先要掌握。颈联与尾联多处平仄出律。通篇看来,好像都做凑字凑句,颈联与尾联越偏越,偏离了主题,建议重新检校,修改格律,...
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