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古典联九高级班北大组第二讲第二节作业贴 | 
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问好梦联:对句思路可以,问题是上联是今音,古音失替,所以,对句“同与独”失对。 
 
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问好夕阳红透:落花(偏正),山远(主谓),结构失对。 
 
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问好笑语盈然:上面已经评过您的作业了,这联就不评了!!! 
 
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