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古典诗十四期基础第十五讲秋组作业贴: |
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问好梅花学友;格律韵部正确,文字流畅,尤其是结句采用了比喻手法,赞!继续保持,顺祝学习愉快!
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问好简兮组长;第一题正确,第二题起承句多字出律!建议下次写完作业一定要检测哈,顺祝您学习愉快吧!
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