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古典词二十六期初级班扶摇组第四讲作业贴 |
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问候诗友!小令写的不错!学习了!惜不符合作业要求!没见到梅与雪,只看到诗了。希望下次看清作业具体要求!期待下期精彩!
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问候诗友!作业格律自检哈!小令布局合理,脉络清晰,格调清新!学习了!过片对仗再工点更好!期待下期精彩!
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