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古典词二十二期初级班第十四讲舒荷组作业贴 |
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点评:没写出春思之意,只写出了春日之景。
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点评:上阙写落花,下阙抒情,因花落伤春思人。脉络清晰。
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点评:上阙写看花开春暖,而思乡,下阙写思乡难归,看鸭戏水,脉络清晰,立意明确。
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