|
古典词十九创作班采莲组第一讲作业 |
点评
问好老师,整体来说合乎作业要求,下阕三,四句有些词不达意,有待打磨,煞尾还需再凝练一下会更好!
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
|Archiver|手机版|小黑屋|古典听风书院
( 蜀ICP备15023305号-1 )
GMT+8, 2025-7-18 05:19 , Processed in 0.124844 second(s), 22 queries .
Powered by Discuz! X3.2 Licensed
© 2001-2013 Comsenz Inc.