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古典词十九初级班望梅组第十五讲作业 |
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我怜。问候词友:这首清平乐较好,我也挺喜欢。后文整体应该是从记事说起,所以与寒月关联似乎并不大。题目得该成月下即事
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很漂亮小词,人月合一,语意双关,很得清平乐的写作手法,棒棒哒
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