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词十五初级班第八讲子瞻组作业贴,评阅老师:江南8-22,佬诡子剩余楼层 |
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很好的小词,值叫人向往的生活,两人对弈杀得黑天暗地,那种感觉真叫爽,可惜哪只是回忆了,赞
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“春”“不”出律,很好生活小情调,择字词要斟酌。再接再厉
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很留恋银杏树泛黄的情景,怎奈好景不常在呀。很好的小词
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“天”出律,很好的思亲词。
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