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古典诗二十二期初级班东山组第五讲作业帖 |
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一个人占两楼,那老师可就省事了哈。谢谢小明!
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诗友好:绝句压平水韵,平仄合规。主题一次素斋,白玉、青蔬寓意清新,三句檀烟示意居所,结句后三字“味自醇”不错,也含有精神方面的淡然。学习了!
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