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古典词二十七期初级班婉兮组第八讲作业帖 |
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评阅-鸿雁老师:词中梦境宁静美好,修竹侍梅,鱼虾追逐,清风蝶舞,花香馥郁。斜倚古松,把酒享福,意境悠远,令人向往。总评:优秀
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问好诗友,小词景多于情,立意不是很清楚
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