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古典诗二十期基础班第十讲春组作业帖 |
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表达了对鲤鱼跃龙门的殷切期盼和高考的艰辛,如同感同身受,很不错,起承转合也都处理的不错,很赞!
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很不错的看图写话,韵律平仄也都正确,小绝本身无可挑剔,但貌似有点跑题,题目说以高考为意……
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