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古典诗二十期基础班冬组第六讲作业帖 |
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题一回答正确,题二绝句立意好,格律正确,转承得法,有情感升华,很好,欣赏学习了!
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问好同学。题一回答正确。题二格律无误。题目为端午感怀,作者一反常规套路写出了新意,挺不错的,二句稍费墨了,可以精炼一点点评不当之处请见谅。
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