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古典诗十七期基础第四讲春组作业贴 |
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问候同学,一二三题正确,题图,结构稳健。有点意思,不足之处,口语较重,没有留白,还需要炼字炼词,本诗就不做修改了,同学加油
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问好同学,一二三正确,七绝结构稳健,用词用句,不太如意,同楼上没有留白,
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