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起句两个排比句写的漂亮,写一种春愁,从醉中醒来看到花谢都无心吃饭了,惜花怜花,以花喻人,花虽谢亦有归处,人归何处,恩顾就显的和上下句关联的有些痕迹了,可斟酌
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朗朗上口,转折起伏有趣有味,新颖别致,很好的一首词,看得出来是老手了,赞
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