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词十六初级班第一讲木兰组作业贴 |
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小令格律正确。一二句写了春的迷人。转结句写花繁香透,却不见赏花人。惋惜之情尽见。且耐人寻味。欣赏了
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小登科问好,格律正确,用韵无误,写出了春天生机盎然,有静有动,不错,措词上下功夫,赞一个
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