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古典学院词十五期初级班第二讲易安组作业贴,评阅老师:紫玉清涵8-19楼, 无情墨问... |
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简评:作者以中秋之际拟游子借佳期团圆,红字应仄,归字应仄,立意清晰,不足之处建议语法句式组合有待提高,结句显得词不达意,老字显得生硬,韵部无误,
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