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古典诗十一期五律第九讲秋组作业贴: |
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问好菊花台,首联写笤帚的原材料,颔联写制作过程,颈联写笤帚作用,尾联借物抒情,脉络清楚,一首好诗,拜读学习了!
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问好秋月,首联巧梳妆和威风有点儿不搭。颔联居草泽也并非闲时,颈联尾联写的不错,尤其尾联,拜读学习了!
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