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古典楹联十六绿水组第二十二讲作业贴 | 
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问好!学友!平仄没问题,对的稍微差点意境。欲把桂花香小字,总将秋色入诗情,这样你看来 
 
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问好!学友!对句不错!赞一个! 
 
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不错,加油! 
 
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问好同学作业还不错 
 
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