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古典楹联十六青山组第二十一讲作业贴 | 
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对句和出句意境有隔 
 
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对句和出句不在一个画面 
 
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对句和出句意境相左 
 
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对句也能说得通,对上了。 
 
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对句能让人看懂,就是没有诗意,可再练。 
 
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对句和赏析不错,点赞。 
 
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