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古典诗二十期七绝第七讲秋组作业帖 |
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问候同学总体不错点个赞,但我个人觉得网罗,疴有些凑痕
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问好学友,格律正确!起承二句流畅,转句入情,合句回味!挺不错!继续努力!加油!
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问好学友,格律正确!众多冲浪人?太俗了吧整首诗立意深远,但用词太糙,应加强炼字,对遣词造句应多下功夫!
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问好学友,格律有误!自查!
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问好学友!格律有误!自查!这首诗和网不占边,怎么断的更无从说起!
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