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古典楹联十六绿水组第二十四讲作业贴 | 
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″未到″是否为″味道″?这里一骑江南烟雨里,是说一匹马行在江南的烟雨里。所以"千般″的词性就不对了。意上流水想法不错,注意诗家语的运用,力求语感优雅。 
 
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隔景了。 
 
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问好同学,对联后半部分词性不对,细斟酌斟酌 
 
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