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古典联十一第十六讲清新组作业贴(评阅老师~英子) |
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问好清风秋月,一题对句可以,二题对句犯忌,孤仄,翩失替失律,下次注意
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问好沉默,一题对句可以,宋朝改宋唐一个更好看,二题对句漂亮,学习了
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问好暖阳,一题对句三平尾,意境漂亮,粗心了,。二题对句漂亮,学习了
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