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古典诗二十期五律第十讲晴组作业帖 |
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第三联表达略有些模糊,尾联立意不错,但前边没做好很好的铺垫,转的有些急!
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思路清晰立意明确,点赞!君骨和若妍对仗略显牵强,总的来说是一首不错的五律作品!
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诗友好文采学习了赞
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