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古典诗十四期基础第二讲夏组作业贴: |
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1.平仄入声字都正确,2.格律正确,四句清江不好,五句离字不好其余都好
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问好学友,第一题中“浥”不是入声字。格律正确。第二题中,三、四句平仄失替了,再斟酌斟酌。其它三句还不错,加油!
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