|
|
古典联十二期第十九讲花溪组作业贴(点评瓶子老师) |
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
点评
一联不错,二联石径偏正,春秋并列。整体联语流畅,有潜力。继续努力。
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
|Archiver|手机版|小黑屋|古典听风书院
( 蜀ICP备15023305号-1 )
GMT+8, 2026-3-3 14:01 , Processed in 0.519531 second(s), 22 queries .
Powered by Discuz! X3.2 Licensed
© 2001-2013 Comsenz Inc.