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古典联十一第二十二讲清新组作业贴(评阅老师——英子) |
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问好陶希明,对句一可以;对句二对字了,再炼;对句三可以;对句四好看,学习了;对句五隔景,雁是秋天,蝉是夏天,对句六再炼
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问好沉默,对句一题可以,思换生,感觉会更好,个见;对句二好看,对句三漂亮,学习了;对句四可以;对句五好看,学习了;对句六好看,学习了,作业棒棒哒
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