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第二十一讲草阁组作业贴(点评清荷老师) |
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对句联意没有拓展开,加油
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对句意境不错,个别字再炼会更好。加油
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尽量不对字!先析透联意!加油
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意境不错,个别词再炼。加油
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句二不错,句二有点合掌,加油
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可以,个别词需再炼。加油
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