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古典联十复旦组初级班第四讲作业贴 |
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RE: 古典联十复旦组初级班第四讲作业贴
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问好秋意,断句正确,蝶为古仄
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问好青苹果,断句正确,对句不错,学习了
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问好平实,断句正确,对句可再酌
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问好月影,断句正确对句不错
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问好莫寒,上联分析的很好既然上联绿草如茵,下联寂寂我觉得不合适,上下联氛围不一样
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问好乡语,断句正确对句众禽可酌
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